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Jade Marbles
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Posted - 2013.10.20 15:37:00 -
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I like it.
The look of a petite and cheerful lady.
Even the little tattoo looks good.
Bright, shiney and cute - 9/10.
EDIT: darnit, a guy just popped in before me :D - above notice is more Miss Fey.
On that note, finally a male avatar with some charisma, I approve.
Not a fan of the background however, I think with a different one you'd nail it a little more.
Still - 8.5/10. |
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Posted - 2013.10.20 16:58:00 -
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A woman with cohones, and ginger too!
Approve!
The only things I would probably tweak are a little darker, shaded lighting, brows to match your awesome chestnut colored hair and perhaps a slight different coloration on the lipstick.
Sounds like a lot of critique, but don't misread me.
8/10
Drew Dawkins wrote:
And I for the life of me can not find a background that matches better. Halp!
May I suggest or recommend some of the more industrial looking, rusty backgrounds? One that comes in the color flavor of your vest good sir.
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Jade Marbles
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Posted - 2013.10.21 07:55:00 -
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Antonius von Oestenkhof wrote:
Thanks for the compliment ,ma'am.
Actually , he is a young gallante with a genetic disease called Werner syndrome.
He's 24 but looks 50.
Portraits with a mini tale.
With your description the avatar makes sense.
Initially I found it a tad too polished for a bearded fella, but you explained what's going on and with that said I'll rate you a 8/10.
The only thing I am not convinced with is the background. |
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Posted - 2013.10.21 18:53:00 -
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Drew Dawkins wrote:
The hair.. for some reason it turns off the whole portrait for me. Everything else is great. And I took your advice and changed by background. Yay or nay?
Still a 9/10.. because of the hair.
It's a major improvement, your avatar is much less static. Adds a certain warmth which was much needed.
As for my hair, I'm stubborn.
It makes my avatar look so fresh and light!
I appreciate the feedback though, but I love how Jade turned out, she reminds me of someone  |
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Posted - 2013.10.22 08:54:00 -
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci wrote:Your avatar looks really light, and it almost looks like you're in water I like how all of the colors basically match-and the tattoo is a nice touch! 9/10
Thank you! Yea I like the aquatic vibe alot.
@ Balau: You big meanie. Being sneaky from under your hood.
Very typical for Amarr. Warm colors, nice work with the tints and a expression at ease.
Well done. 8.5/10. |
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Posted - 2013.10.22 13:37:00 -
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Nadia Fey wrote:GIRL!
Are you on crash?
Because if you are the state isn't going to like it very much.
7.9/10
I'm afraid to admit it is what I initially thought 
As for you miss Fey, you'd make a straight woman gay.
10/10 |
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Posted - 2013.10.22 14:56:00 -
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Commissar Kate wrote:I have not blonde hair this time.
As for the portrait above me.
9/10
A very pretty face.
Perhaps a slightly more playful pose and modestly brighter or more cheerful background would up the prettyness.
8/10.
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